Seems your interpretation of something so simple as a waterfall comes to life as so much more ;)

short, but very sweet. very good!

Niagra Falls is amazing, isn't it? They really are such magical things, waterfalls...I like your interpretation. :)

This is really a beautiful poem, I've never seen the falls, but reading this I don't have to. It's so descriptive.

Hey...luv the poem...truly captivating
Heartwreching wonders in a worl so small- very nice
Good job! :)

Wow, that is so... breathtaking. I've been to the falls, and your description is so powerful, but ties emotion into it as well. It's an awsome poem.

I can see this written on aged yellow paer on an old womans wall. It is very peaceful and well written.
Stones decay, words last
Nick

It's so breath taking...There's not a single word to describe it. Just beautiful.

oh wouldnt that be cool? just to be "urs?" very powerfully written
Mack