I find that's it's so hard to love everybody sometimes. Forgiveness isn't as hard; it just hurts when others won't forgive you.

wow. this is really great. i can understand exactly how you feel just by reading this poem. this is an excellant expression of feeling.
and thanks for the review!

This is beautiful. I love the message you give, and my absolute favourite lines in this are "And it is only through pain that Holy Love can be seen
Because Holy Love sees through the pain
And overrides all logic"
This is so true, it is one of the most precious things I have been allowed to experience.
I wouldn't say you need more rhyme and rhythm in this, I like it the way it is. Some poems just seem to cry for a regular metre and rhyme scheme, but this one doesn't. ;-)

This is very good and I've often felt the same way, but I would suggest a more consistent rhyme scheme and rhythm to help fluidity.