Really good... I like the grey dawn too, and used to watch it with someone... what you wrote was great.

Chew, chew. Hey, this didn't happen.
You're too emotional, and you were high off Diego Luna goodness.
I'm glad this didn't get, like, soft-core **-y. How weird would THAT be?
Chew. See you in a week, sweetsy!

this is so sweet and slightly sad and beautiful. not to mention well-written. It's very good.