you have to continue. im really into this storie. its sexy and dangerous,with a little drama mixed in.

GREAT STORY! KEEP WRITING! LATES!

Wow . . . that's all I've got to say. Wow. I'm not even sure how to describe how much I enjoyed reading this chapter. It was beautifully written, and . . . wow seems to be the only word coming to mind. Bravo.

Goodness, if I only I could write like that . . . I’m still working on my bloody grammar, and word-choice.

hey! - in answer to your little note at the top- i read your story and decided to review! i like it- and yeah, it is confusing...but i like it a lot. so continue!

I like it so far. And it is a little confusing, but I'm sure I'll be able to figure it out. Please update soon!