! Why have I only JUST seen this?! It's absolutely lovely! And perfectly contained - short and sweet at its utter best. My only qualm is this: when I am green, it is fiercely deep and lush rather than pale ;) Oh - small typo in 'co[n]sume'. Yum... this is a delicious morsel of poetry to consume before I have to go back to my gerontology exam reviewing... yay is me. *scuttles off*

i don't think you should change anything about this, it's wonderfully quirky in its brevity. and also gorgeously described,

"My muscle-memory decieves me." a fantastic way to say falling over, the colours make me think about personalities and emotions and i adore the last four lines... well done packing so much depth into the short verse.

Ooh, I like this! The first line had me hooked, and I absolutely loved the clever end. :) I don't know how to describe it, but it gave me a lot of cool images and I was very much impressed.

Ha! Love the ending.