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Reviews For: Knots

Furbs 2004-09-05 ch 1,	abuseCan I guess who this song is about? Hmm, the stupid one? Anyways, I really like it, but you have some rhythm problems in the beginning of some of the verses. The last two lines of the first stanza in each verse don't seem to flow real well. Hopefully you understood that, but its definetly relatable song for everyone. "A plus"!
JupGrrl 2004-08-15 ch 1,	abuseThis was pretty good. The first read through I'll admit I was a little critical of the repeating "stomach in knots" phrase, but on the second read through, it kind of clicked together and actually, the simplicity of the statement really gets the message across. The second time I read it through, I could feel the anxiety and stress that this person causes you, and the repeating verses really emphasize the obsession. I particularly liked how you ended the last verse- leaving it hanging at "tighter, tighter knots" left me with a visual image of the kind of confusion and stress that this person leaves you with. Great job! :)
William Winters 2004-08-13 ch 1,	abuseI know that feeling. Nicely done! The way I hear it in my head, the word "knots" should have some special emphasis (maybe putting it on its own line, to give it a bit of a dramatic pause), but it works well the way it is.
SpeckledEmu 2004-08-01 ch 1,	abuseAww Liz... that was cute. And it makes it even better that I know who the subject is. Hehehe. But then again, so do alot of your friends... haha. Its actually real good Liz, and I really liked it. You can make a song about me anyday Liz... it would prolly be better than anything I ever try to write. Have a nice day dearest
CRaZy-OdIN 2004-07-27 ch 1,	abuseAww such a sweet love song, but ahh the nerves do seem like they're going to kill you at the time don't they. It's a very good and sweet song, I like it, well done, keep up the good work. Nice theme, nice structuring. I rate this song: 7.7/10

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