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| Clodhopper 2004-08-18 ch 1, | abusei liked it. i liked the last stanza, it was my favorite mostly because it flowed really well in my mind. i also liked the rhyme scheme. way to be ~Mack and Ty |
| glitterjewele 2004-07-26 ch 1, | abusethe last two stanzas of this were amazingly intense. really fantastic imagery, and once again, great cadance. |
| tastes like love 2004-07-26 ch 1, | abuseI like it a lot, it's a good piece. R&R mine? |