Nicely expressed. I can feel the emotions. I also very much appreciate the snippets of French; I do absolutely adore language, foreign and not.

hm, a very interesting piece.

The cotten blouse makes me think of a private school maybe...

you end the lines in unexpected places- like in the two lines one from the bottom of the first stanza.

I don't understand the whole of the second stanza so well, I blame my vocab...but I do like the ending

This I like too..I love your writing its quite obviouse that your much better than me...lol..
Raven-chan