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| glitterjewele 2004-07-26 ch 1,   | you HAVE been away too long. this is very good, very descriptive. definitely sounds like it could be quite an intriguing prologue to something. i especially loved the line, "by firelight from papered lips" ~ it was beautiful. nice work. :) |