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| b likes to write 2004-07-27 ch 1,  | abuseOoh, this is good... excellent imagery. I can picture this person's slow and painful death, which is kind of sick, but that's the point right? Or have I mentioned I'm not so good at analyzing poetry... ha, great work! |
| genesys 2004-07-26 ch 1, | abuseVery evocative. I liked it. |
| inky night 2004-07-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, kinda evil...i like it. Great job, excellent descriptions! |