This is so good :)

2005? Ouch. Haha. I can see a progress from the first chapter to the last chapter in your writing style. That actually kept me reading the story. Although, it may not be the most original work ever, the way you wrote certainly captivates people to want to continue reading it.

I'm glad you decided to share this story with us, even if you won't be continuing it. :)

More please!!

I'm sad this wasnt continued. i liked it alot.

This is seriously awesome, I Love it!
I really hope you get the next chapter out soon!

Hey! I really love the story & was wondering if you were going to continue/update it?!

I really like this story and hope you'll write more...
And I'm for Jake and Tech to get together :D

I love this story so much! It literally has me at the edge of my seat. Please write more! Please Please!

you have to make more!! i mean i haven't been able to pull my self away form this story for two whole days. i mean this is my favorite story of all time. so please please make more. please and thank you.

this story is really good!
I WANT HIM TO CHOOSE Kyle! Kyle, I say. Jake is so old his relationship with him is practically... peodophillic, if that's a word.
:K
Bloodfeeder

Are you going to finish this story? Please finish this story! I love it. I need more. I want more. Please. Continue. For me. For all of your other readers. Please?

I want him to be with Kyle not Jake! Jake kept pushing and pushing! I don' like him, I think he's an **! And what's up with their mom and that guy she's with... does he hurt Tech?

MORE SOON

~shadow

hm. very interesting. i like it :D
please update soon !!

Are you going to finish this?

UPDATE PLEASE!