That was very good. It was very different from other peoms I've read on time. I especially liked the lines
"A story is passed on
And another forgotten"
A well assembled piece.

Interesting. I liked it

This is great. Really lovely, great flow, beautiful message. Amazing...

yAy! loved it!
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random ... a girl named Linnet came to my apartment yesterday! She was really perky and up-beat! Completely haooy and sure of herself adn fearless! She came int my apartmetn, too! She was unescorted! I was talking to my girfriend on IM, adn she watned to chat with her (and did) cause she was form Seattle to! it was a fun cahnge! Sad thing, I moved her in March, and she is the first girl to be in my place! *sigh* Oh well! Weird, today i kinda wished she would have come back, she seemed like a fun girl to talk to! But, not for TOO long (lol). Just thought I's share, I ONLY remember her name becasue I know of YOUR name here! Cool, huh!

I like it. it's interesting.