m...yup, that is a good one. I like the way you talk about it in the poem, like ... "it's silly and you're just a fool on a leash of pressure" kind of thing...yeh, I like it )
ps suicide is bad! :P

It sounds alright. It could have been longer I guess. It's good though
I wish I could say more but I'm in a crummy mood -_- heh, sorry if my review sucks...

Suicide is never the answer, especially in poetry!