Hey, this is my only way of COMMUNICATING with my lifeline right now, my e-mail isn't working:(. not like it EVER does. Sorry, i'm defacing your reviews o_0. hehe. hehe. hee. ok, i really really like the poem though, it has good description, and alot of feeling. keep it up trooper:D
And remember, don't play with fire!
-Smoky('er' :P) The Bear

i like it.
especially the anger towards the end.
(i can feel it)
maybe though, add a bit more punctuation?
just a thought.