wow this is gorgeous. awesome imagery

Beautfilly written and nearly flawless in my eyes. Marvelous!

Dude that poem, was way good.

This is nice. Well written.

Ah, what a nice poem that was! No matter what, there's always at least a tiny flicker of hope even when all things seem out of whack completely and hopeless! Very nice message, and wonderfully written poem with very nice imagery! I LOVED IT BUNCHES! ^_^

I liked the duality - how one stanza ended in darkness and the other in light (or hope, rather). The lines "A trace of hope/Worn but bright" had good imagery.

Simple and good.

it's very lyrical, short but a great poem!

I love it. Your way with words...absolutely wonderful.

Light... *trying to sort out what to say* *thinking very hard* all i can say is Wow... lightly and with so much respect.

"Hope"--is most powerful when all seems to fail. The series seem to be connected by invisible dots in the wind...we know it's there, but can't always prove so!

Je l'aime,

~K

I like how you used short phrases, but were able to easily get the point across. I love the descriptiveness in this poem as well!

CoolI like this it is very fast paced but in a way to the exact point while using detail. good work! ~Zeheria

sort of every cloud has a silver lining huh! it's a good poem keep it up!

this is an awsome poem thanxs for the review on my war poem ps i am keeping up the great work just like you said although im not so sure if its all that great but your poems awsome keep up the great work to

good peom you always need hope