|Reviews for Light in Shadow|
| just dani 3/31/06 . chapter 1
wow this is gorgeous. awesome imagery
| Stormie Greye 12/5/05 . chapter 1
Beautfilly written and nearly flawless in my eyes. Marvelous!
| SeaVoi 8/30/05 . chapter 1
Dude that poem, was way good.
| Moonjava 8/29/05 . chapter 1
This is nice. Well written.
| shinco 7/15/05 . chapter 1
Ah, what a nice poem that was! No matter what, there's always at least a tiny flicker of hope even when all things seem out of whack completely and hopeless! Very nice message, and wonderfully written poem with very nice imagery! I LOVED IT BUNCHES! _
| Eyes Unclouded 7/5/05 . chapter 1
I liked the duality - how one stanza ended in darkness and the other in light (or hope, rather). The lines "A trace of hope/Worn but bright" had good imagery.
Simple and good.
| lackluster 6/27/05 . chapter 1
it's very lyrical, short but a great poem!
| eldrin 6/24/05 . chapter 1
I love it. Your way with words...absolutely wonderful.
| Quebrada Angel 6/3/05 . chapter 1
Light... *trying to sort out what to say* *thinking very hard* all i can say is Wow... lightly and with so much respect.
| scudcrow 5/24/05 . chapter 1
"Hope"-is most powerful when all seems to fail. The series seem to be connected by invisible dots in the wind...we know it's there, but can't always prove so!
| Diane Lynn 5/24/05 . chapter 1
I like how you used short phrases, but were able to easily get the point across. I love the descriptiveness in this poem as well!
| Zeheria 5/22/05 . chapter 1
CoolI like this it is very fast paced but in a way to the exact point while using detail. good work! Zeheria
| celentia-changingacconts 5/16/05 . chapter 1
sort of every cloud has a silver lining huh! it's a good poem keep it up!
| another randomnobody 4/24/05 . chapter 1
this is an awsome poem thanxs for the review on my war poem ps i am keeping up the great work just like you said although im not so sure if its all that great but your poems awsome keep up the great work to
| MexicanGirl 4/15/05 . chapter 1
good peom you always need hope