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| Midnight Proc 2004-08-14 ch 1,   | ... Simply subperb. I liked how you wrote, "(please don't let go/ this time)". It gave me a sense of pleading, which accents this poem nicely. |
| Mormon Princess 1 2004-08-06 ch 1, | This is so good. |
| Jewish Heathen 2004-08-05 ch 1, | Awesome, short and powerful, plus something I think almost anyone can relate to, but most of us can't get it down on paper. |
| Typesour 2004-08-04 ch 1, | Oh wow. I mean it. That was a short, simple poem and yet you managed to get this vast meaning into it. I love this! It's so sad and sweet. I'm going to check out your other poems. Off I go-- |
| floorcollision 2004-08-01 ch 1, | yeah, totally, i know where you are in this poem. thanks so much for the reviews-- you're a good poet too! high fives! peace- fc |
| simpleplan13 2004-07-28 ch 1, | aw.. sweet but sad... i like it a lot |
| GiftedxxCurse 2004-07-28 ch 1, | this is happening to 2 of my friends, and you captured it perfectly..bravo. i love this, and all of your work. keep writing |