I've written so many poems like this that you speak of...using the metaphor of the act to see God. I'm glad you crossed my work so that I saw another writer does this too. Please return to some more of my work. I think you'll find a lot similiarities in our thinking.

I really liked this. I thought it was very original and that it had a very nice message. Please ignore the first reviewer...they seem a little immature for the message of this poem.
Then again...perhaps I'm just being judgmental...

Jesus is a sexual predator. Sorry, I'm getting too many things I can do with this. I mean, I can see the new billboards now : Let Jesus enter you(r heart)! It's orgasmic!