How can you say it's not too great? I thought it was excellent...very expressive...I like that about your works...

Morbid Maxwell

I like how it makes you think.

wow...though it is meant to say the complex matter of death in a different situation, you have made it to where I could relate to this poem...very nice...

Great poem, short but sweet. Sorry I can't give much more then that, just arrived home and I am dead tired. Anyway, incredible job.
Katlyn

hey man sweet poem u know im more into writting but i really liked it and if any one else is reading this trying to decide if its worth ur time... it is.

hey man sweet poem u know im more into writting but i really liked it and if any one else is reading this trying to decide if its worth ur time... it is.