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| somethingwithatail 2005-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't know what I'm wishing you luck for exactly... but I wish you luck!... Unless you need luck for killing someone... then it depends on the person ;)This is a... seemingly great poem... I like it... It's definitely angsty and .. I've been liking angsty things lately...btw.. i said 'seemingly great poem' because i know next to nothing about poetry.. that's sra's alley... but I liked it so to me.. it seems like a great poem.It makes you think... For some odd reason the word 'numb' reminds me of Pink's song... the rest of the poem doesn't tho...I'd like to tell you one thing tho.. and next time i see you i want you to promise me that you believe me... You are NOT a 'rotten person' or a 'rat'. And I'll try to brighten your future by being your friend, always. Best Bud FOREVER (that means no matter what!), ~*~Sammy~*~ |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-09-06 ch 1,  | abuseomg that was so damn good and relatable! ive felt like that so so so so often its crazy! you rock as an aouthr, amazing poem... wow... |
| ashlee 2004-07-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseok ok ok ok ok i will but ok ok i will! |
| Tom Madden 2004-07-31 ch 1, | abuseI wish you luck! In fact i wish you luck times infinity, (and it doesn't get any higher than that) ~tom |