This is really really nice. It flows really well, great job, keep it up! Please read and reply to some of my stuff... my poem "Oh, What a Fairy Tale" is based on Cinderella and Prince Charming, too, but my fairy tale had a happy ending. :) Thanks, I really appreciate any reviews. :)

Aw...
I liked the ending to the original Cinderella better, no offense.
Extremely well written though, good job.