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| Angelfish 2005-08-16 ch 1,   | Nice story! |
| do not resuscitate 2004-09-18 ch 1, | oh beautiful beautiful and still more beautiful. this was so surreal, so hazy and lovely and spun around darkness. i loved this so much, you have so much talent. |
| Just Wolf 2004-08-08 ch 1, | Your usual subtle brilliance runs through this story, but it is the dialouge that really carries it off, your characters appear in what they say, although your narrator seems to defy catagorization, she doesn't fall into being a character, but seems like a free spirit, a butterfly. the two characters words contrast each other utterly, and that's what makes it brilliant. and your desccriptions make it absolutely tantalisingly beautiful; i adore it. this is a wonderful story, poignant, subtle, and a true observation of those crazy thigns called people. |