|Reviews for The United States of America|
| A-Whimsical-Freak 8/28/04 . chapter 1
People will never unite. Don't you understand that? It's like a veil has covered the world because people each have a preferance.
/I, for one, will not go to a pink website. That doesn't mean I don't like the contents, it just means my preferance isn't pink.
/But I agree nonetheless.
| simpleplan13 7/30/04 . chapter 1
I hope so too... I love that last line especially!
| kaze-nyv 7/30/04 . chapter 1
Wow. At first I wasn't too sure about the poem, but the ending... that was amazing. I particularly loved the part:
You don’t realize that in America
Gays can be straight as easily
As an African American can be white
A Pagan can convert as easily
As a Christian can give up his faith
And an Arab can change as easily
As an elder can reverse her age
But you do realize that America
Has a horizon of hope for everyone
That was particularly powerful to me. As a pagan and an advocate for gay rights, I guess you might see why. Very well done.
| suzieque2 7/28/04 . chapter 1
This is well written but I have a bad feeling about Kerry