Black butterfli, please! update because i LOVE this story and i wanna know what happens!


so please give this story up for adoption, keep it and let it grow, on this website! and make sure you don't leave this story until it it finish!

and even as i type this story is growin' spider webs! so UPDATE!

TTFN!

well all i gots to tell you is update! dang it, update. or i'll be forced to come to your house at night and abuse you...until you update. i'm saying update so much because i'm tryin to see how many times i can say UPDATE! UPdate! upDATE!UpDaTe!hahahaha!! the power is in the word ,UPDATE!MWHAHAHAHA! I'M AN EVIA GENUIS! THIS...is...POINTLESS!O.o ...T.T WAH!
OH YEAH AND you SUCK!! HA HA I AM JUST PLAYING>

Hi i know it has been a year, but i like this story and I hope you update soon. BTW I like Simon and Aisha...Luke is a lost cause, and I am assuming Aisha will be outcasted now.

This was a really good chapter. Update soon!

wow this story is addicting! i wanna know what happens between Aisia and Luke! i'm so ** because they DESERVE to be together! update ASAP!

I bow down to you. You are an AMAZING writer and I automaticly get sucked into your stories and you reviewing my story (A Taste For Chocolate) is such a honor . I can't wait for your next installment for all your stories, I love them all. simply june

aw it's so cute! i like it! update soon!

So I finished reading all of the seven chapters of this story and wow! It's a really great story you have here Black Butterfli.

Simon's a really interesting character and the more I get to know him the more I like him. Ash is completely smitten!!

Anyway, can't wait to read more from this story!! I wonder why Jos and Luke aren't at school? Could it be that they finally know about Jos' pregnancy??!

Peace,SleepingAngel•·.·´¯`·.·•I await for you to wake me•·.·´¯`·.·•

Wow! What an interesting way to start the story. Poor Jos! Poor Luke! Excellent chappy!

Peace,SleepingAngel•·.·´¯`·.·•I await for you to wake me•·.·´¯`·.·•

good chapter update soon

She needs to dump her "friends". If niether one of them have figured out that she likes Luke after all this time then they aren't very good friends. And I think she's probably going to wind up with Simon and then Luke is going to get jealous. Am I right? Anyway, I really like your story! Write more soon!

aw.
im sorry- i just realized my constructive critisicm sounded kind of rude. i didn't mean it. but when i meant, fast-paced, it's sort of you don't want to go slow-paced either because it gets boring- but nevermind my comments
this chapter was interesting since you found out about her family, i wonder if her sisters will turn up again..hm.
continue. i definately want to hear more about this simon fellow. i think i love him. hah, and i know nothing about him

that was intense. why you found out simon changed-
the only thing i'm going to go constructive criticism- i found it a little fast paced, it moved realy quickly, but other than that- it was really good- can't wait to find out what happens with Jo

Sounds good. Update soon.

you never get to find out more about the situation with her reply to this simon fellow
haha those poem's made me laugh.
constructive critism: hm, that's hard. i don't have anything to really nit-pick at
please continue