Lovely, very visual. Tragically enchanting.

I love this! It paints the immortal darkness of vampires so well. An accursed race, "Forsaken" race. "Time is my gift" stuck out for me. Amidst all this darkness, all these depressing lines, there's a "gift," a spark of light. And Time...an entirely different, inexplicable realm unto itself. Very good use of words and connections.

OMG... *tear* That's brilliant!

:shivers: oo i liked this a lot!!

*SW*... Thank you for your review of 'Jessica' it won't be continued on FP... they would just take it off. LoL. You can read it on the other websites i mentioned in my profile.. if you want. =)

i liked this one. great choice of words.