great story, i love all the before indifferent stories. Very interesting, keep writting.

I LOVED Trent's story more than Skye's although she's still my fav. It was so good, I loved it a lot. I could probably read this one over and over again. I really liked it, you did an awesome job.

The story and theme are touching, with a little work this could be a beauty. However, there are quite a few grammatical mistakes and typos, and the dialogue between Trent and his father in the second part doesn't sound realistic. The opening is good.