Reviews for Wonders of Life
invalid id 8/1/04 . chapter 1
Good as always
Cry Tears of Darkness 7/30/04 . chapter 1
nice work yet again
axica 7/29/04 . chapter 1
this comes off sounding so optimistic and innocent especially with the repeating words
but on a closer look one knows that the subject sees darker things in life
great job
Spanish Dreams 7/29/04 . chapter 1
Interesting poem. I like the repetition of "wonder".
Todd Scott 7/29/04 . chapter 1
A very illustrated summary of what's probably nearly everyone's perspective on life at one point or another, subconsciously or not.
Great writing! You should go more into that style of poetry if you haven't already.