I always loved this one.D.

I must say that this poem is very creative and powerful and determined...I love it

i really like that. it's very creative and...profound? yes, i think so. i like the way you where creative, but understandable at the same time. some people try to be creative and forget what their talking about. great job n thanx 4 the review!

very nice writing, I like this metaphor of a transparant rainbow.