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| Nae-chan 2007-02-21 ch 1,  | abuseI loved it! So sad and then happy. Great job. |
| Kageyama Tatsuya 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abuseAww, what a sweet story. The main character's obvious vulnerability is very nice. I really like this one. The detail is graphic yet close to home. Undoubtedly there is someone out there who has been through a similar situationa dn had no one to turn to when they really needed somebody there. Brilliant job. Wes |
| Pyreflei 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuseAt least you've found reprieve. I feel happy for you. With such wonderfully expressive writing, you certainly deserve it. |
| Kitsune Luver 2006-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseEven though this is short, I still feel like it has an impact. I felt uplifted at the end. Three words really can change your life. Hopefully for the better. Aww. |
| slashysecrets 2005-11-30 ch 1, | abuseYou really should change your settings to include anonymous reviews... I'm a lazy bum, didn't want to log in. Well, I think this might be the first non-fantasy, origianl work of yours that I've read, and I have to say... I love it. So sweet and poignant, and (as always) well-expressed. I'm jealous of your ability not to be overly-wordy. You should give me lessons. ::hug:: Lauren |
| dex2468 2005-05-22 ch 1, | abuseI really like this! Very good! |
| Darkladyknight 2004-07-29 ch 1, | abuseoh, this was good. slighly confusing but really good. will it be continuing or is this it |
| kat-mle 2004-07-29 ch 1, | abuseOmg I'm literally crying right now. This was so moving because I know stuff like this actully happens. He should have told someone!! If someone is reading this that is being abused or bullied, TELL SOMEONE! It helps, even if it doesnt seem like it at first. Please, pain isn't worth going through when it can be stopped. Also, NEVER commit suicide. That isn't the answer. Excellent work~ Kat~ |