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| Kamui Musackie 2004-09-12 ch 1,  | abusei like the storyness of teh poem *nodnod* very specialness.. |
| LipGlossandBlack 2004-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI'm guessing this one is also about David? i wrote a poem about him too, which seems a little odd still to me since ihave known him for 10 years. But I guess that makes it all the better. Even though I'm not much of a poet, o well. Everything set aside, urs is a good poem. :) |
| jun 2004-07-30 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, that's very touching, I think I'm in love... |
| Debbirooni 2004-07-30 ch 1, | abuseFirst off, I'd like to say great job on this poem! It's one of my fave's now. It's very expressive, and the rhyming was not forced, which is also a plus. The ending, I guess, is a little "cliched", but it's still a great ending. I like the descriptions you place in this poem, and they are very thorough. I'd just like to say great job on this poem. There's nothing else to say, really. Nothing that I'd change, at least. Great job! Keep writin'! -Debbirooni |
| Yulan 2004-07-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is such a good poem! I loved it, it had some many feelings smushed in it. |
| melancolie 2004-07-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is great poem!so expressive! Keep writing |
| Eternal Confessor 2004-07-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is too cute! Keep writing! |