everything sounds great. it's the subtle things like the word yeah and animals like the rhinos. the only question i have is about randy's name,is it supposed to be a nickname or is it really her name. just out of curiousity. i love fetcher's name, it fits him. i think it'd be awesome to have him teach kate to use the swords. she could kick some serious **.
btw, i love your pen name, and don't feel young, you're older than me by a month.
luv
hannah banana

great job! i like! good humor! plz update soon
-shadowgirl618-

oh yay, you updated! good job!

Poor Kate. I hope Randy dies a slow and painful death at the hands of Fetcher. Now THAT wouldn't that be amusing...

Poor Kate. I hope Randy dies a slow and painful death at the hands of Fetcher. Now THAT wouldn't that be amusing...

Omg i have to change my penname. ANYWAY THAT'S BESIDES THE POINT RIGHT NOW.
YOU.
UPDATED!
YAY!
I was actually startin to despair :(
Anyway great funny chapter. I loved it.
and by the way, I sent you an e-mail *coughle coughle* to suggest a title for your oh-so-magnificent (i'm not kidding) story. I don't know if you received it?
If you didn't, the title I suggest is
CHAOS.
or K-OS
Or Whatever.
It sounded good at first but not that much anymore.
Anyway, I will send you some positive thoughts telepathically (if that's a word)even if I absolutely don't know you (except for the fact that you're a great writer) and hopefully, you'll be able to take less than...(ok i have to check) 2 and three quarters of a month to update, k?
TOODLES!
till the next review!
oh. do you mind if- never mind. *grins*
e-mail: geneveva4417@hotmail.com if you wanna know ;)

Gosh Anya! I love your stories and I loved Geek Wars and now I'm in love with Robbit's Story! And did I mention Fetcher makes me feel all fuzzy inside!

Muahahahahaa...life is going to be a sarcastic nightmare for Randy and Fetcher now! And...Fetcher WAS lying about when he said Kate was "one of the best...frieds I've ever had", right? ... ...Right?

Cheh? ^^ **hopes that Fetcher will be kicked or something** Whee! Hm...I wonder...what DID just happen? Why did Kate's hair change? /_\ I'm so confused!! *cries*

XD BWAHAHAHAHA! "To say the least, I screamed bloody murder." That was great(well, maybe not for Kate, but ya know, that's okay)!

heh i still like fetcher.. gosh all your stubborn mean argueing characters get the guy...

Mae Govannen.
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Ooh teh w00t! I love.
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I really do sympathize with teh bimbo... Randy? Whatisface... Fetcher... reminds me of one of my friends. Actually, maybe three all mixed together. And then Kate is just awsome. And ever so confused. I could have been someone kinda like her when I was younger... if I hadn't craved attnetion so much. Ah, attention is a wonderful thing. *basks in the glow of other people paying attention to her*
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Nah, but I loveses them all. Even teh bug. And the gorilla. Who reminded me of Hagrid. (coincidence, or planned?) And the elders were great. I love how Kate (aka "Chaos" *le snicker*) kept trying to break the rules and all with them. Huzzah for her!
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Erm... yes. So I love this story greatly and erm... yus. ^_^
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May the penguins grant thee a long and happy life. Ahem.
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Namarie.

Okay. I liked this chapter much much much (insert more 'much's here) better than Chapter 3. In fact, Chapter 3 was so boring I didn't bother to review it. So now I am reviewing again, which means this chapter amused me enough to expend energy. Good job...that is a difficult thing for me to do these days. Oh, yeah, it was funny again too. Kudos.

Damn! that was one good chapter! It was so funny! I love the way you think and you humor... I think I'm oficially hooked to the story now. I just don't get how Kate is so imune to Fetcher... the part where he whispers in her ear made me swoon just by reading it! and Randy being an air-head is genuis- it was so funny and original it something you don't expect in fantasy where everyone is so serious and rightous and stuff, its those special touches that give your stories that extra something. Hope you update soon...
Lee.

great anya! i love the way u keep the reader at the edge of her seat! great quility!
lisa!