This is beautiful. It was like.. a song. The words fit it so well, it was like it came with music.. Very beautiful. I loved the last line, it was so touching... Keep writing and never stop! ((this is on my favorite stories))
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~:~ Melena Estaine ~:~
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this was an awsome poem! I really enjoy the symbolisms in all poems, and this is no exception. Wonderfully done! and keep this up ;)
truly,
M.Lauren