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| instantvoodo 2008-04-19 ch 1,  | abuseNice story. |
| moonlighthaterd07 2007-12-19 ch 29, | abuseI was just wondering when u where going to update email me at |
| TheGreenPrincess 2007-07-05 ch 29, | abuseGAHH!! UPDATE UPDATE! AWSOME STORY!! =] |
| chocolatemusic 2007-03-13 ch 29, | abusewhere did you go, love? |
| Just Crane 2007-02-02 ch 29, | abuseplease update! |
| LittleSparky 2007-01-04 ch 29, | abuseWhat happened to you? You haven't updated in ages. Please do, I love this story. Li'l s |
| pooky wingz 2006-12-23 ch 29, | abuseomg OMG OMG! THEY'RE TOGETHER YES YES YES~ now make a sequel where he dumps her FOR MOI! no i'm serious it's what everyone is wanting to read! COME ON COME ON YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO! |
| Writing4Eternity 2006-09-12 ch 1, | abuseSo, its been 7 months now... |
| windowbreak 2006-02-20 ch 29, anon. | abuseHURRY UP YOU!! i thought you almost quit writing... =[ |
| Elly. (I forgot my sn for f... 2006-02-19 ch 29, anon. | abuseOh my god Thank heavens you're back! I missed your lurvely stories! |
| Captain-PalidoOceano 2006-02-15 ch 29, | abuseHey, I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed your story. The characters are awesome and you do a wonderful job with the story line. I hope you keep writing it as it is definitely one of my favorites of all teh ones I've read. Good luck with it and every story you write. |
| Violaaa 2006-02-14 ch 29, | abusehappy v-times day! |
| Princesses of Saturn + Jupi... 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abuseHey hey I love the story please write more storys like it becuase i have read both storys only it was in a different name but plz write more story's like this one because they are awsome From Strawberry |
| lost-pfreak23 2006-01-06 ch 28, | abuseoo! soo good! im so glad u updated! i love this story! |
| RoxyRoo 2006-01-04 ch 28, | abuseOne of my guesses a few chapters back, I think Uncle Sam hired James to protect Stephanie, since he knew this bad guy was coming after them. However with how Steph is, he figured she would not take to a body guard, and stage that whole making her think she was kidnapping him, which is why he never tried to escape. Also explains why he kept going to the bathroom, and how Sam was telling her to not let James out of her sight. They said that the uncle's murder has not been caught? I thought it would be the same as the one who was after Steph, the one who killed her mom? So is it two different people? The ones who were falling Steph and James, who are they with?I thought there would have been a bit more of a mystery to the whole who killed her mom. I thought one of the many characters were in on it, whether it be the 2 brother, Will, Uncle Sam, or James (or his dad). I was suspious of each of their movements in the whole story! With how James was constantly in the bathroom, or how Will was scared to talk to her uncle...Can you tell I like a good mystery? Anyways, those are just some of my guesses throughout the story. I really love this story, you had me on the edge of my seat at several parts. Great job! |