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sinner saint 2004-09-01 . chapter 1
Nice poem. It portrays a really nice message about helping people, and it's a very nice little story. Well done!
~sinner saint
PS R&R mine?
Mormon Princess 1 2004-08-27 . chapter 1
Very good poem. I really like it!
raven-birdie 2004-08-24 . chapter 1
My guess is that the gift's a smile. :)
Nice narrative poem. I like the story that it portrays. It carries a true message to it to, how a gift from someone you don't even know can change your life for the better even if ya don't realize it.
One thing though. You may want to work on your diction a lil bit. It rhymes only sometimes and the rhymes are a bit well, juvenile? Other than that though, good job.
flechette 2004-07-30 . chapter 1
This was good, but it only rhymed sometimes and with the same words alot. Despite that nice work, good poem.
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