sounds like a wraith poem to me. Anyway it is awesome, and you used one of my favorite words, (guess which one)

I read your poems and ... I feel this pain... this ... I can't even explain it. Your writing is enrapturing. Its beyond anything I've ever read or probably ever will... after all this time. I would have never guessed you Buela(?)/Babs would be this... amazing writer. And yes its me Matt. I really am speechless. You know my AIM screenname. So IM me sometime, I'm usually busy during the day so... Probably the best time is after 6 pm.

very inspiring I loved it. nice work Kat. I love your work so much!

Oh my God, that was amazing. It was so short I was worried that it wouldn't be able to convey too much, but it was much deeper and symbollic then I could have imagined. great job.

oh wow, i loved this! it was very well-written and profound. nice work.