This is beautiful and it shows so much emotion... I loved it... It says alot about things I feel...

I love the upbeat-ness of it.D.

Again, long, but I very much liked the beginning and the end [it got a little vague in the middle]. Both parts reminded me of some feelings I had for someone very recently, and the end reminded me of "Strive", which I also wrote for that person and I hope you'll read.

Nicely done.

This is a good piece of writing. I bet a lot of people can relate to it. Well done! Please review my story India. Thanks and well done again.
Mimi xx