TB: *Squeals* You write poetry too! I really like this one. Yes it me, the wierd crazy moody reviewer again. *Evil Cackle* And I still haven't gone to bed yet!

Tasuki: -_- That's it. I'm going downstairs to sleep. Hmm. I can kick Young Kal off of the couch. The least he can do is let me join him.

TB: Eh eh. Tasuki's thinking dirty!

Tasuki: *Blushes* I am not! Get your mind outta the gutter and go to bed!

Youko: -_- We've got to get her off of this computer. I've got an idea. *Holds up a PS2 paddle.* C'mere TB. Come get it! It's Resident Evil Zero! Your favorite game! Come kick zombie butt!

TB: Whee! *Pounces on the paddle and then goes into a dazed state.* Must...kill...zombies...

All: *Sigh*

Youko: That'll keep her busy for a few hours. And quiet so we all can get some damn sleep. Hey, fire boy, before you join your new found lover on the couch, end this thing.

Tasuki: *Twitches* Damn you all! He's not my lover! It was an innocent comment!

TB: *Is still in Zombie Killing mode*

Tasuki: -_- Fine. In the words of TB-

TB: *Jumps up from the bed and flashes a peace sign* KEEP WRITING! *Goes back into Zombie Killing mode*

Tasuki: Yeah. ** it, scoot over Kal!

awesome poem! it rocks, i like the way u describe the vampire biting, very nice.

hm...interesting. you like the dark side of life, dont you?

wow. you build up a great visual as well as making a point about the vampire. keep writing like this! it's so good!

All I can say is that it sounds kinky.