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| Nekomaru 2006-04-27 ch 1,  | abuseNo offense (and please don't think it's offensive) but this seems more useful as a screenplay. Put it like that and your story will be more effective. Trust me! ^^ Nya! :3 |
| Amayrdn 2005-05-20 ch 6, | abuseOh my gosh. I like it, but chapters 5 and 6 so far have been still in html format, and it makes it so hard to read. I think I'm missing parts trying to sort through what's code and what's part of the story. It's damnably difficult, but I'm going to try to keep reading... |
| White Sands of Time 2004-12-29 ch 8, | abuseLoving the story, keep at it!^-^ |
| Catsupracus 2004-12-18 ch 8, | abuseThis is a really cool story, keep writing! |
| White Sands of Time 2004-10-19 ch 5, | abuseSo far so good, but I found this chapter a little idy bit hard to read. Do you think you could fix it? This is really good though! ^-^ |
| White Sands of Time 2004-10-18 ch 1, | abuseI'm interested in what's gonna happen. This is a great start. ^-^ |