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| David Stephen 2004-08-25 ch 1, | Brilliant! I really liked it! Your work is so original and fresh. Keep it up! ~David~ |
| Arlais 2004-08-21 ch 1, | Yeah, I had a friend like that too. Wonderful poem. |
| Leftomaniac 2004-08-06 ch 1, | This is something that I think many people can relate to. You use repetition very well. I plan to revise the paragraphs you pointed out in my story, incidentally, sometime in the near future. Thanks for your help^_^ |
| Nienyalie 2004-08-05 ch 1, | *smiles* Something I can definately relate to, and probably a poem that many need to read. Very well expressed point. |
| fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS 2004-07-30 ch 1, | I know what you mean. I have a friend like that. That's a beautiful poem and u did a magnificient job on it! many kudos! later days FTT |