 kalamityjane 2005-07-26 . chapter 1 I've never been able to put that message into words quite right... bravo! That was marvelous. I love how everything rhymes without sounding monotonous. (like some dr. seuss stuff... blah!) |
 WickedIceMaiden 2004-07-31 . chapter 1*google eyes* ya know, i think this is one of my favorite poems... *sigh* its really very good and i love the concept... because well... very close to well... you know what im talking about. |
 Alexz Lynn 2004-07-31 . chapter 1Great poem! I love how you incorporated all those different fairy tales. I really liked the line:
"Why is it that this Prince
just doesn't feel quite right?"
Also, I wish my fairy godmother would appear. because I have a lot of stuff to wish for. Again, nice job! ^^Keep Writin'^^
~ Alexz Lynn |
 Mettie 2004-07-30 . chapter 1This is fabulous! Haha, I love a poem that can make me laugh~ Very well done! I'm adding this to my favorites! ~*Mettie*~ |