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| R.Adam 2006-06-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked this poem. |
| Autumnymph 2005-09-29 ch 1,  | abuseI can imagine someone standing barefooted on cold grass, looking up at the sky and sucking in the mist, then closing her eyes to feel the wind, and a kind of indescribable feeling comes up from within. And then he. |
| Scripture 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abuseO well done! I like how the first lines were realistic, then the second lines were metaphorical. Great job this is pretty! |
| Werewolf Nighteyes 2005-02-01 ch 1, | abuseSimple, and beautiful. Your words bring up a feeling of content and warmth. Nice poem. Keep on writing! |
| Eleanor Gibson 2005-02-01 ch 1, | abuseIt's really quite a sweet poem. Through all these comparisons and statements, it seems like you've expressed what you wanted, and your choice of imagery was wonderful. -Rae |
| Aslan Israel 2005-01-29 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully sweet. Great job. |
| Keith Andrew 2005-01-29 ch 1, | abusei like the short stanzas and the repetition they were quite effecdtive actully. nice work-Keith Andrew |
| Faithless Juliet 2004-07-30 ch 1, | abuseI like it, it has a power to it and a calmness that I can identify with. Juliet. |