Not much of a fan over romance stories but not a lot of people are. Though I do have to say this story was pretty strong in all of its glory. You definitely have something going for you. Keep up the work and you'll be making your first book soon. Kinda sucks that some of that (most? I dunno) happened to you for real. Hope your life lifts up and you won't get dragged down anymore. I know how you feel.

okay i'm gonna go cry now...in a corner all by myself...
i really do like this story, i noticed a few typos so you might want to go back though it once again to double check, but you did great, i'm glady our a fictionpress member now!