|Reviews for The Ceiling|
| Rachelle Spirit Boyens 3/25/05 . chapter 1
Hm... This poem could be a song. You see, it doesn't matter if it makes sense to anyone else...
| Kirona of the skies 8/1/04 . chapter 1
Hey, I could have sworn I reviewed this already...o_O;;
| myheartyourhands 7/30/04 . chapter 1
I found this piece of yours very intersting. I enjoyed reading it alot. It caught my attention the whole time! Nicely DONE!
| nick-wordsmith 7/30/04 . chapter 1
Great rythm, I like this poem alot. Well done!
| ByFireAndMoonlight 7/30/04 . chapter 1
Hm, someone thinking about suicide, and yet not quite ready to quit on life? This is good. Keep it up.
| Midnight Proc 7/30/04 . chapter 1
I loved your short lines, as they created an unique rhythm. I liked how you start and end this poem with a white ceiling. Well-written poem.