Hm... This poem could be a song. You see, it doesn't matter if it makes sense to anyone else...

Hey, I could have sworn I reviewed this already...o_O;;

I found this piece of yours very intersting. I enjoyed reading it alot. It caught my attention the whole time! Nicely DONE!

Great rythm, I like this poem alot. Well done!

Hm, someone thinking about suicide, and yet not quite ready to quit on life? This is good. Keep it up.

I loved your short lines, as they created an unique rhythm. I liked how you start and end this poem with a white ceiling. Well-written poem.