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elloello 2008-05-09 ch 1,	abuseyou just wrote the last three years of my life. i went crazy over a best friend -- the kind of crazy that you think is love because what else could make you want them after they treat you like , treat you like the best friend, not the girl -- and it led to a complete breakdown of the person i'd always been. actually, this is bizarre, because i go to yale. ( maybe life really won't get better for kaye.) and i went from yalie to a crying reak who satyed in bed because she didnt want to show her pufy eyes in section. then after two years, i gave it up. i hit my low and decided there was nowhere to go but up. so i said goodbye. only time i ever saw him cry. after living together for two years, we became strangers for the third. he's graduating in two weeks -- and i won't go. i still miss him and i still love him. i keep waiting for it to end, but it hasn't yet. i wonder when.
anon. 2008-04-08 ch 30, anon.	abusebeautifully done. the arrangement and the words moved me. it was pure and i FELT what she felt because her emotions were so real, so true to life. it was simply awe-inspiring.
Okazaki 2008-01-12 ch 30, anon.	abuseoh my god. Kaye and Jon must be dehydrated all the time, due to the constant crying and whatnot. and the sighing! Why is there so much sighing? In fact, that's pretty much the only way I can describe this story: Lost of crying and sighing.
Amanda 2007-10-07 ch 30, anon.	abuseThis is so... indescribable. Iloveit- Iloveit- Iloveit- Iloveit- && Iloveit. Your style is so raw. So lyrical. So humane. So poetic. So real. So... I don't know. I can't think of a good enough word that'll do it justice. But I know this is the kind of thing I'd reread over and over again. (I mean, I've already started my second time reading this) Too bad I can't think of anything amazing enough to say. But that's just it, for me. Unfailingly amazing.
RaindropsOnBlackRoses 2007-09-27 ch 3,	abuseThis is interesting. I did get way too repetitive when she kept saying 'what a jerk' though. I'm a little confused as to why Chris is saying that 'Monday is the beginning.' Gotta read more later.
RaindropsOnBlackRoses 2007-09-25 ch 2,	abuseWow...that was kinda crazy. I'll read more later.
the big crunch 2007-09-25 ch 30,	abuseyour brilliantly amazing. i was choked up the whole time. and cried.
Premium Stalker 2007-09-25 ch 30,	abuseWow, I remember this story. This story was (or is) amazing. I love, even two years from when I first read it.
RaindropsOnBlackRoses 2007-09-25 ch 1,	abuseSo far this seems pretty good. There were a few mixed tenses but that's about the only thing I found that could be fixed.
Crystallized Pineapple 2007-08-06 ch 30,	abuseLike hundreds before me have said: your prose really is beautiful. It may not be the easiest kind to read - it's a bit of a heartbreaking style, but it can't be denied that it's an absolutely gorgeous one. I can't really praise you enough - you've got developed characters who are all completely screwed up, and yet they're human too, so it's hard to like them or hate them completely. And throughout the story, you're one of the few authors on this site who can actually write a plot where the final outcome of the story is seriously up for grabs. I'd love to see this published one day, but given how it's already been posted up on the world wide web for all to see... there might be some issues involving copyrights and all that legal **.
Kar3b3ar 2007-05-03 ch 30,	abuseoh well...that was good lol. i could probably write a whole page on how great this story is, but there's not enough time for that. i didn't cry surprisingly because i think that girl was me in a way. i was very dependable on a person, who shut me out for a year and i didn't know who i was. its take a lot of pain to get over the ** in your past, but thats why i love this story so much.
Kar3b3ar 2007-05-03 ch 15,	abusei truly do like this story, except for the sighs, i mean its great to know how Kaye is feeling and the other characters, but sighs shouldn't be so descriptive, makes the story way too complex. that didn't make sense, but i think you know what i mean. i think kaye needs a break from everyone, she is pretty ** up right now.
Kar3b3ar 2007-05-03 ch 12,	abuse** tell your mother the damn truth. geez.
shylilgurlie 2007-03-26 ch 30,	abuseThis was absolutly awesome. At the beginning it threw me off just a tiny bit but it was so good. Seriously. Great job.
alineofprose 2007-01-08 ch 30,	abuseThis is completely beautiful. This is rain, dipping in heavy doplets and clinging to your eyelashes with fervor, and the smell lingering in the air for days, entrapping you. This is beauty in the breakdown, and sometimeds Imogen Heap and The Scene Aesthetic will put the words perfectly. This is character development, with willow charcoal; forming a picture so rough yet refined and one that aptly sways you somehow. This is a brilliant soundtrack. It echoed in my head, spreading words and lies and love. And I saw sparks. [Fantastic writing.]

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