Ah I really like this story, it is very original. :D I love how flawed the main character is and how he's beginning to overcome that. I imagine all the characters have some major flaws (maybe that's why they got picked for the game??)

SO happy to see this updated btw.

I can't wait for the next update ^_^

Good luck!

OH MY GOD. This is so interesting. I can't wait to find out what happens next! :D

So glad you updated this story! I really like where this is going.
Thank you for the new chapter -and the whole story, while I'm at it!
I hope to read more from you soon :)

I just had to let you know how much I've enjoyed reading this. The idea behind it is wonderful - the links, and items, and guides and everything. I love the characters. Everything they say or do just seems very realistic. Some of the things that you've revealed have happened very subtly and I really like that. Wonderful story you've got here!!

I am so please you updated this story. I've always absolutely adored it because it really has so much potential, and is also really original. I hope you continue it after this... even if it does take another few years it would be with it!

I have waited -forever- for this story! And I'm so happy that you've updated it! The concept is awesome, the characters are lovable. Thanks for writing it!

-MD

You bring out my inner rabid fangirl.

Just thought you should know.

Great fantasy story!!

The idea of the five items and five types of links is brilliant. Hope to see what Shane does next. (And the key is probably my favorite item so far.)

Update soon!

Aww, I'm in love with this story!

please update sooN!

It will quiet down the voices in my head...O.o

Shock and delight at an update!

I want to high five you.

Is that weird?

It seems weird to me...

I wanna join the game. It would be a extremely fun game if it was real... Like in a video game... or something...

I don't want to get ate by shadow monster things.

update soon ^ ^

Hey this is a great story. I'm really loving it. I can't wait to see if there are anymore scenes with the soul sucking demon. Also who is behind the whole game and if there is an ultimate prize. And if there are other groups of players out there that are further ahead and that means that everyone will have to start working as a team to keep up. And if higher levels become harder to progress through or if its just like playing solitare over and over but harder. And if there is a pioint to the game to begin with.I really hope that you go more into the game and not stop it once shane and his crush get together. I think that you have a great story with lots of potential here.

I have no clue why but when I think of Shane going to find another fear link it excites me .
lol
:D I think the fear one so far was the most fun to read.
But I think I'll be proven wrong when the lust link comes around;).

It's weird not seeing a story you liked so much updated for..what was is, four years. It's almost like it never stopped though.