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Gambatte
2008-06-08
ch 5, anon.
abuseAmazing action and plot!! Keep up the great work!
Niktia
2008-05-29
ch 5, anon.
abuseLove it! loveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveit!

although, really, i wish he'd put the damn key on a necklace or chain or somthing so i'm not worried about that nasty devon stealing it. :)

** awsome.
Elodus
2008-05-15
ch 5,
abuseseriously you need to continue this
Serolina
2008-03-17
ch 5,
abuseI LOVE THIS STORY! it is so amazing and crazy and I can't get enough of it! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Troy Kantz
2008-02-25
ch 5,
abuseThe best damn thing AVRIL WAS WRONG!

please update!! why why havent you? it is so good, most definitely not something to abandon :(
Gizomo
2008-02-20
ch 5,
abuseWell, I must admit I'm not too fond of the crush thing, but that's just me, since I like the slow-to-love sort of thing more. xD

Well, you're probably dead now, D: but I hope that you'd update someday.
SpasticGum
2008-02-10
ch 5,
abuseI'm curious to know why you haven't updated in such a long time. It really is quite a shame since it's such an awesome story. I'm totally hooked, but extremely disappointed, as it doesn't seem likely that you'll be posting another chapter.
Oh well, I shall add this to my faves, and to my alert list.
Lac3d w1th p01s0n
2008-01-21
ch 5,
abuseWow, awesome story! I'd go into what's so awesome, but I'm not quite sure where to start. The characters are lifelike, the plot is intriguing, I mean - what's there not to like?

Have you completely dropped this story since you haven't updated in the past... two and a half years? I hope you do resume, because this is definitely a story worth reading.
Love,
P0!s0n
CrayonMentality
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abuseHahaha, Shane's cruel to poor lil Zinc, he can't help if he's an overly chatty rule book lol.

That spirit demon was scary though!! *hides*

This is a really cool idea, and I really like Shane's character. Can't wait to read the rest. ^^
MoonlightWings13
2008-01-01
ch 5, anon.
abuseABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!
I could rant on and on for hours! The descriptions, the humor, the characters, the style-- all of it is spectacular! I really envy that. Since you haven't updated in a long time, there's probably little chance that you will... But thank you so much for writing it! It was a treat; definitely.
notsignedin
2007-12-29
ch 5, anon.
abuseThis story has me hooked, and it makes me so sad to think that, given the last update date, it's probably not going to be continued. Well, amazing story so far. If you're still out there, please consider continuing it?
queen-of-forks
2007-11-24
ch 5,
abusei just found this story and i love it~! instant add to favourites list~!! and then i noticed the update date which is back in 05...lol i am not sure if this is going to be updated but i really hope it will be.
so looking forward to more, until then ^^
Neko6892
2007-11-13
ch 5,
abuseNew reader!!
Great story,the plot is really interesting and I love Shane's sarcasm XD
The way Devon and Tristan fight over Shane is funny too,I hope that it becomes a love triangle,or is it already one?*drools over imagination of what might happen when they try to win him coughcoughmolestationandfunnyscenarioseherm* XP
I really love this story,its definitely one of the best slash stories I've ever read(it actually has a decent plot and min imal grammar problems)So keep up the good work and please update soon!!UPDATE! >~
LaylaLivesLoosely
2007-10-23
ch 5,
abuseThis was really fun to read. Looks like it's been deserted, by the update date (that sounds funny...) but I had a good time reading it! I love Devon... and Shane...and Zinc!
Meanne77
2007-09-30
ch 5,
abuseWhat I think is it's a shame you seem to have given up on that one because that was an original, interesting and enjoyable story... Too bad, really... v.v
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