Contrary to your reviewers and the obvious angry and dramatic emotions, I found this piece very funny. I was thinking of a writer's voice and the poet's block I just came out of. And I was substituting.. I guess... whatever you were using to say you hate/love and putting my poet's block in that.

Get away from me! You don't love me!

hehe

Yeah I'm a bit unorthodox. Please don't pelt me with rocks. :)

- Julian

O.. I really like this piece. You can sense the contradiction sentiment and anger through the entire thing. The person is in tears, or very near to having them in her eyes. She's confused, but truly, she knows what must be done. Great job, keeping going, never give up.

Your body of work is like a collection of paintings, I find myself weaving in and out of different periods in your life.D.

I like this a lot, the way it's written and the way it flows. Love it. I like your writing.

P.S. Here I am

Their I was

their-there, just to let ya know (again) hehe )

WOW! That is really really really powerful! I can relate...Oh and thank you for reviewing my poems and such...review some more if you like!
Love,
Sid