Ah! That is so cute! It reminds me of when I was little and I'd watch my brother play with his matchbox cars and such.

Love it! Excellent job!

Wow, usually i don't like rhyme but this was really good. It flowed well and it was amazing to read. It's great.

aw it is cute.. ncie rhyming

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I love this poem. the rhyme fits PERFECTLY~ it's so right for this poem, it makes it like a sing-songy child's ride but it has a meaning to it. Very well done.

Super cute, I like it.

VERY CUTE!!