| Reviews for Everyone Except You |
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Shayna 8/12/04 . chapter 1 All of your poems are awesome! From Your BF! -Shayna! |
marshbar960 8/1/04 . chapter 1this isn't bad but i did notice several typos along the way: "Everyone say's I'm odd" - you really don't need the apostrophe before the 2nd "s" in "says". "Everyone tinks I'm cold" - you may want to insert the "h" in the word "thinks". "Everyone says I'm in a crises" - you may have meant the singular form "crisis". And finally, "Everyone lloks at me differently" - you may have meant "looks". Aside from that, thumbs up. Thanks for sharing and keep writing! |