Caught up! Even reread some stuff I'd forgotten details on.

Best part of rereading it? It's STILL awesome. In some ways, even better than when I first read your first (posted at least) version. I'm really impressed, as always. It's nice to see a steady incline of quality. Characters still make me happy beyond reason.

Well, I see it's been a while since you updated. It was nice of you to wait for me to catch up in my reading, but chop chop. Time to write more!

First of all: Yay. My whining makes you write faster.
Second, good call on Onslaught's name change.

And for the rest of the chapter, I think it had good flow, going from section to section fairly well. The dialogs, as usual, both amusing and go with the flow of the plot.

And as much as I'd like to do a long, fancy review to reward you for updating so soon after I whined, I fail at long winded and babbling reviews, so what I mentioned above is all you get, along with my approval. ^__^ Good job!

I like how you balance out character strengths like that, plus, yay, more Mulls centric stuff! ^__^ I'd do a longer review, but I figure approval is enough. You don't get more than this. XP

I enjoyed this. Keep up the good work.

Well, I have no idea why I didn't get the update email, but I am largely upset. *pouts*
Anyway, some good banter here, Mulls...being Mulls. Though I think Midnight hit right onto his personality. He is SO the antihero, the 'I'm not a hero, I'm a protagonist' type.
Anyway, good chapter. Update soon, and tell me when you do, incase I miss the email again.

All I can say is don't change Mulls too much. I like him as the anti-hero jackass...which probably says something about me. But anyway. It's good of him to help Robyn like that, keep her from getting 'hardened' by her losses. And she's lost more than Shell as so she needed it more. I can see her holding Mulls' 'weakness' over his head. In a 'Be good or I'll let everyone know you're not the ** you pretend to be' kinda way.

In all, I liked it. Very emotional, lets you get to know the characters and how they work together better. Good banter.

My title idea was better. >.>

Seems like you have a lot of dialouge lately...but as everyone seems impatient for action I assume that will change.

Short chapter, so I really don't have much to say...

^__^ only Mulls is ** enough to annoy Obelisk. I noticed the connection! I just didn't say anything. >.> In case you were just fond of the move or something. Some authors over use a single phrase or technique, and it wasn't irritatingly overused, so I didn't mention it. If all of a sudden everyone used it I'd have told you to come up with new moves. It's good to know you had a purpose to that.

Now...why does this hoarding of souls to bolster an evil gods forces sound familiar... *smirk* I think I can guess where you got this idea.

Good chapter, and about bloody time you updated. ^__^

I'm confused, I must have missed something. Nexttime you're on, you are explaining things to me.Heh, but the bit with Mulls was well written. ^__^

Woo Mulls! I'd love to do a deep and analytical review...but I'm tired. And all you get today is my aproval. XP

...I like how you proceed to flame people's stories without even bothering to read them, then make claims about your incredible works (which are surprisingly, NOT in your page!) to other authors. I also like how you have no concept of the term "critique" which means to not only point out the bad, but the good and more importantly, make actual suggestions on how one could better the story.

No, throwing it in the trash or anything of that sort is NOT a suggestion **. While I do listen to people's comments and consider their suggestions, I make it a point to not even consider looking at people who won't even bother putting their own work up. After all, for all your complaints about people's work being crappy trash, the irony is that you're probably even worse than I. Put up or shut up, that's all I've got to say there.

So here you are, making flames to authors that you've placed in your favourites and mention on your page that your sole purpose here, is to bash people. I wouldn't be surprised if you end up never submitting a single story here, nontheless an actual review. Frankly, I don't really care for this kind of spam (oh, I checked the stories of the other author you've favourited, and you spammed Starlite-Dragin too) so guess what? I'm blocking you, so that's that.

...Wait, no, there's more.

Did you know what you're doing constitutes as harassing? Indeed! Do you happen to know that in the User Agreement you have SURELY read over before signing up that you're actualy forbidden to cyberstalk/harass authors around here? No? Then I guess you don't know about the possible severe punishments that come with violating the Terms of Service.

Oh, and to answer your question about why I bother to put this "piece of thick **" up here is because I love to write, moron =D

Now, I'm off to report this to the abuse email. You'd best hope that any other person you've spammed doesn't do this too, although I would find it funny if you got banned from here XD

Did it really take you two years to write this crap? What a waste of time. Black Destiny... it looks like this turd of a story plopped right out of your **, missed the toilet, and went straight into your computer. Why you uploaded this thick piece of ** is beyond me.

FP SLAYER! RAH!

No minors allowed, so back the ** up!

...

I see all I need to do is whine to get my way. ^_^

Okay...so. *squee Heheh, starting to like Obelisk's 'evil' side. *smirk*

Past stuff, an interesting bit of history that connects to Shell. We'll have to see where that takes us. And who are the voice and the man?! Did you mention it and I missed it some how?

Since you FORCED me to review, (by way of not really doing anything but asking and making me feel guilty) I will.

As you well know and shouldn't have to be told, it's a good chapter. A little lacking in the action department, but all the dialogue is stuff that need to be said and is intreresting to boot.

I like the idea of a prequel, but in order to start that you'd have to actually finish this one. >:(