interesting. have u ever thought of making ur stuff songs? i see so much song potential in ur poems.

yea alcoholism among other things is one reason my dad was never around so i completely understand..great poem n keep up the good work much luv

This is really good. Again. It talks clearly of the things that could happen when under the influence. Great job.

You ever try addng music or video to this? That'd be one hell of an D.A.R.E. program(;

This is really well written and it express that things that can happen due to a drinking problem. I have seen this happen with my aunt and her husband. I don't want to see it again. I hope your poem shows some poeple that it's bad abd that it helps prevent it. Awesome work.

this poem is definitely something that all individuals should read, including the youth. right, drinking not only affects the one who's doing it but also those around him/her. still i love the way you told a real-life story in the form of a poem. thanks for sharing and keep writing!