That was an amazing sense of a reality unknown to much of the populus! Absolutely SUPERB!

*whistles* This was freaky as hell. And long, too. I was very impressed with the way you put this together, and how wonderfully you placed the refrain. I mean, just... damn. This scared the hell out of me. It's like... "go ahead and kill me, my ghost will make your life a living hell and you'll never be able to escape it."

Oh yeah. This was very creepy and I really like it.

Beautifully dark poem. I love it. You're talking to your "killer" but warning him of what will come to him if he dares to end your life. I absolutely love this. Strong and powerful words.
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Regina O.B.

Still the greatest! Love it! (I'm hyper despite teh fact that it's six in the morning!) Well...c ya!